Thursday, April 23, 2009

Trying to be 'deep'...

I've posted a poem on the Samples section of the website, would appreciate some feedback. I've put up a few Haiku as well.


  1. I love the poem.
    I just think the line "Or is it obvious that I’m just saying what you want to hear" might read better as; "Or do you think that I'm just saying, (new line here) What you want to hear." I sent you an email explaining why I think a five line stanza will not be too out of place...

  2. yep, got that thanks, will read the poem you sent and decide then...cheers